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A CRONE WITH A BOTTLE. Or two.'s avatar

I loved the slow burn of tension in 'I Have Some Questions for You'. Some masters of the page-turning genre make me feel manipulated by dangling every chapter ending over a cliff. It takes great skill to make readers forget that tension was deliberately employed as a tool.

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Amy Pease's avatar

My biggest writing fear is cheesiness! You touch on that at the end but I'm not quite clear on what NOT to do when adding tension. I think your point was that the narrative should be robust enough to drive the tension much of the time, rather than jazzing up an inherently saggy story with ambiance or unanswered questions. Are there things you see writers consistently getting wrong with this? Thanks so much for the deep dive into tension!

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